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Dear Evelyn,
How are you?
I miss you. That's why I am writing to you. It was a while, since I last saw you. I was wondering, what do you think about the meeting? I can't really go to your country, but would you like to come to Poland for the holidays? For no reason, just to spend some time together. As you know, I live in a small town, Skierniewice. It's not that far to the airport. I can pick you up. We can spend that 2 weeks watching netflix, drawing or going for a walks. If you can't, that's okay, maybe next time.
Love, Marta​


Odpowiedź :

I saw you for the last time. Myślę że to brzmi ładniej.

Osobiście napisalabym rowniez I can't go to your country at the moment ... aby pokazać, że w tym momencie nie możesz tego zrobić.

Reszta brzmi okej