Przetłumaczy ktoś na angielski i poprawi jakby coś nie grało stylistycznie proszę

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Hi Marta !
Im writing to you because i want to know how are you doing .
While holidays i start work as a babysitter and handing out leaflets in the afternoon . I spend two weeks of holidays in Great Britan . I really love spending time there , I was in musem and shopping malls . This weekend i'm planing to organize a party in my house .There will be my friends most of them you already know you met them when you were in my country .
In the evening we will go to the cinema for a grat comedy . I hope we will spend a nice time with friends . See you son
Bay
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