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Hi Violet,
I Hope things are going well with you three days. I live with my mom, dad and three older brothers. I have a pets too. I have five dogs, and five cats. Name's of dogs: (ich imiona). Name's of cats: (ich imiona). They're so sweet and cute. Last Month i have birthday. My family prepared to me a party. It was wonderful! My parents invited on this party my grandpa and my one od four brothers- Dawid. We dance very long time. Later we Play Monopoly. I win two rounds! My birthday present was Play Station 4 and gamę The Last of Us. That was my The best day ever! Maybe i send you more photos? That was help you very well on your project. If you have any questions, do not hesitate to contact me. Best wishes.
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Hope everything goes well for three days. I live with my mum, dad and three older brothers. I also have pets. I have five dogs and five cats. Dog names: (their names). Cat names: (their names). They are so cute and adorable. I had my birthday last month. My family has prepared a party for me. It was wonderful! My parents invited my grandfather and one of David's four brothers to the party. We danced for a long time. Then we played Monopoly. I won two rounds! My birthday present was the Play Station 4 and The Last of Us series. It was my best day ever! Maybe I'll send you more photos? This will help you a lot in your project. If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me. Happy Birthday.

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Jak coś miałaś tylko kilka błędów w czasach ponieważ zamiast przeszłego dawałaś teraźniejszy. I jeszcze jedno nie wiem czy ta końcówka jest dobra bo oznacz wszystkiego najlepszego tu masz kilka innych :

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Wegielbrunatny112viz Wegielbrunatny112viz · Answer 2

Hi Violet,

I Hope you're well.

I live with my mom, dad , three older brothers and my pets. I have five dogs, and five cats. My dogs Are called (ich imiona). My cat Are called: (ich imiona). They're so sweet and cute. Last Month i had a birthday. My family prepared to me party. It was wonderful! My parents invited on this party my grandpa and, one of three brothers- Dawid. We had dance very long time. Later we Played Monopoly. I won two rounds! My birthday present was Play Station 4 and game The Last of Us. That was my The best day ever! Maybe i send you more photos? I Hope that was help you in your project. If you have any questions, don't hesitate to contact me. Happy Birthday.

Myślę ,że najwięcej błędów było z czasem przeszłym np.

Last Month i have a birthday.

co oznacza w tamtym miesiącu mam urodziny

a powinno

Last Month i had(czyli czas przeszły od have) a birthday.

poprawiłam ci także ułożenie nie których zdań

I Hope things are going well with you three days

skróciłam ,żeby było poprawniej na

I Hope you're well.

Było trochę więcej takich przykładów ale nie będę wymieniać wszystkiego bo sama mogłam się mylić.