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Blog by Bartosz
I started playing a new sport, fencing. It is a very dynamic sport because you have to be quick and clever to block your opponent's attack. I chose this sport because I love weapons like a sword. The rules are as follows: when your weapon touches the opponent's body, you win. You cannot grasp the sword with both hands. In April, I was at this competition and took second place among all. I love this sport and will continue to train it.
Mam nadzieje że ci pomogłam :D miałaś/eś kilka błędów gramatycznych
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Mi się wydaje że wrzystko dobrze. Bardzo ładnie napisałeś ;-)