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Hi Ania,
Thank you for your e mail. I hope you are doing fine. I’m writing to tell you that my family.
I live with my mum and dad, my younger sister and our bunny Kicek.
In my spare time with his family watch TV.Last Sunday we were at my aunt's birthday.There were a lot of guss.At birthdays, we played board games, watched TV, went for a walk and talked a lot.
That’s all for now.​Write back soon.
Bye for now,
Weronika

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Hi Ania,

Thank you for your e mail. I hope you are doing fine  (lepiej by było- I hope you are well) . I’m writing to tell you ABOUT my family.

I live with my mum, dad, my younger sister and our bunny Kicek.

In my spare time I watch TV with my family. Last Sunday we were at my aunt's birthday. There were a lot of guests .At birthday, we were playing board games, watching TV, went for a walk and talked a lot.

That’s all for now.​Write back soon.

Bye for now,

Weronika

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Trochę poprawiłam czasy gramatyczne i drobne literówki, oraz u góry masz sugestię w nawiasie co zmienić :)

Powodzenia!

Martyniutkaviz

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Wszystko jest dobrze ale:

to tell you about my family,

and with our bunny Kicek,

together with my family we watch TV,

There was a lot of guests,

At birthday,

and we went for a walk,

To tyle ;D

Pozdrawiam cieplutko ;)

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