Hej, mam zrobiony e-mail po angielsku (na pewno jest w nim wiele błędów). Zadanie jest takie, że musze do niego dodać cztery idiomy, ale nie mam pomysłu jakie i gdzie je wstawić.
oto e-email:

Dear Pat,

I’ve got to tell you about someone I’ve met recently.


This is Jakub, a boy in my age whom I met when I was in the mountains with my parents.. As I was on the ski lift he joined me. On the way up the hill we talked to each other and I liked him. We spent the whole day together and he taught me a few tricks to ski because he is better than me.


He is very kind and funny, he was telling me jokes all the time. As you might have guessed, he likes skiing just like me.


Together, we are also interested in football and computer games. In our free time we play online together.


I invited him to my house for a holidays and I have a ray of hope you will come too. You would have met and we could spend time together playing games and watching movies. We could even go to the lake for a few days. I am sure you would like each other.


Looking forward to hearing from you soon!

Best,

XYZ


Prosił bym abyście dodali do niego te cztery idiomy w taki sposób żeby nie zmienić za bardzo teksu, ale możecie dać propozycje delikatnej zmiany w tekście. chciałbym abyście skupili się najbardziej na drugim i trzecim akapicie, ponieważ moja nauczycielka wymaga rozwinięcia w co najmniej trzech zdaniach, każdego punktu zadania.